EPISODE 3

posted 5th Feb 2020, 3:25 PM

EPISODE 3
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5th Feb 2020, 5:06 PM

NatureKid01

Oookay... lol

Putting that ring on genital ball gives power. What kind of hilarious thing made from? :)

And So... about this episode : i was thinking there should have been a bit more scenes/pages or sequences on this ?, like how the female warrior ''Freya'' and Kuru gotten in cage?, it feels like theres few missing story in this page?, isnt it?


PLus whats with 'LOL' voice or ''lol' dialogue response again? Which is said by Fish king''Neron" on throne. Shouldnt his response been like ''Ughh'' instead of ''LOL'' after his female slaves falls on him? Or is it how its been this way?

And theres probably a bit of story art error in this page : On panel 16 , those two girls face expression of Neron's slave is same as panel 14? Shouldnt their expression been different like ''Hurt expression''
Same goes for Kuru's face on panel 15, his face is same as on panel 17?(last page). His expression on panel 15 should have probably been like angry face after he punches them,shouldnt it? What you think?

(sorry for my english)

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6th Feb 2020, 2:24 PM

FRGX

Thank you for the comment that will help me improve it.
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16th Feb 2020, 2:46 AM

Wargyrl

I agree with everything that NatureKido said. NatureKido has worked hard to show how this strip can be better.

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